Good so far
my advice on the chorus part is that it sounds like its not 'driving' the beat enough. The timing is ok, but the soft consonants make them eight notes harder to distinguish. possible solutions i see: making mountains on DYN where the consonants are;use VEL or DYN to add some separation between some notes to make the beat more clear; back off the voice a bit so drums are helping out better
and i think theres a glitch at the beginning of the verse that slaps a random freq, prob fixable with DYN