VOCALOID Looking for Feedback on My Vocaloid Song

[MTCH]

Hi everyone!

This is my first post on this forum, so I hope I'm posting in the right place.
I make Vocaloid songs as a hobby, but unfortunately I don't have many friends who know or are interested in Vocaloid music. I thought this would be a great place to share one of my songs and hear what people in the community think.

Tic Tac Kaboom

I made this song with Miku and Teto.
I'd really appreciate any honest feedback, whether it's about:
Please don't hesitate to be honest, even if it's critical. I'm sharing this because I genuinely want to improve.
Also, if anyone would like to chat about Vocaloid, music production, or songwriting, I'd be happy to! I'd love to get to know more people who share the same passion.

Thanks so much to anyone who takes the time to listen and leave a comment. I really appreciate it!

 

[Afternoon Oranges]

This is genuinely SO catchy, I really like your song

 

[MTCH]

Heyy thanks, i appreciate
I saw that you love vocaloid 6 and i wonder if you can ear the difference between vocaloid 5 and 6

 

[Afternoon Oranges]

The V5 and V6 voicebanks definitely sound different but I've never used the V5 engine itself

 

[MTCH]

oh do you produce voca songs as well?

 

[Afternoon Oranges]

I do! I'm not very good at it but it's a lot of fun

 

[MTCH]

Can i listen to your music ?

 

[AcousticGrit]

Hi, the melody and drama of the song are catchy.

If I may leave a small mixing suggestion: adding a bit more of delay to the main synths could help smooth out their harshness and give them some nice room to breathe, because right now it sounds a little too in-your-face.
Also, a touch of parallel compression on Miku and Teto's vocals would make them punch through the dense instrumental and stay crisp without losing dynamics.
Additionally, rap-bass at 41 seconds, you need to cut the midrange more, and then apply psychoacoustic saturation to it for soft harmonics, because this wave sounds slightly raw.

I'm just a listener and I love music, not a sound engineer, so take my advice with caution.