Blue Snake Vampire

[Osakablade]

I wrote this song yesterday and today because of Magical Mirai 2019 in Osaka. Did I go, I`m not saying but I live in Osaka.
Its called Blue Snake Vampire and Its about Miku.

 

[mobius017]

I really like the instrumental! If you're open to a little feedback, I'd suggest maybe adjusting the balance of the volume between the vocals and instrumental, though. For the first 2:00 or so in particular, it's hard to hear the vocals. Though I think this is by design in some music genres, though, so maybe it doesn't apply here. Completely up to you, obviously.

 

[Osakablade]

I really like the instrumental! If you're open to a little feedback, I'd suggest maybe adjusting the balance of the volume between the vocals and instrumental, though. For the first 2:00 or so in particular, it's hard to hear the vocals. Though I think this is by design in some music genres, though, so maybe it doesn't apply here. Completely up to you, obviously.

Thanks for your comments Mobius. I listened on my car HiFi and it didn`t sound so good.
I re-mixed, made it dual solos and did a few other things. The vocal is clearer in the mix now.
I think it sounds better.

 

[mobius017]

Great job! Your remixing has been dramatically beneficial. Sounds very nice, and no trouble hearing Miku at all now!