Caprice ft. GUMI, KAITO, & がくぽ—ABSTRACT TOFFEE

[Caprice]

Thought I'd be the first to show off a song since nobody has yet. Constrictive criticism is encouraged!

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[ohpeach]

This is good!! I quite like it! :D

 

[Paradoxical]

Congrats on being the first user-made original song on our site!

The melody of the chorus is strong and the combination of the three vocals is well done. I particularly like the way "That's why you and I together" sounds. Since you asked for constructive crit., then my one thought would be that it feels like it leads off into the end suddenly.

 

[Caprice]

This is good!! I quite like it! :D

Thanks! I'm quite proud of it myself!

Congrats on being the first user-made original song on our site!

The melody of the chorus is strong and the combination of the three vocals is well done. I particularly like the way "That's why you and I together" sounds. Since you asked for constructive crit., then my one thought would be that it feels like it leads off into the end suddenly.

Thanks! Ending songs is always a hit-or-miss with me; it's something I need to work on.