I actually had a couple specific questions
First,
Are the pitch scoops on "heart" too much? Should I save it for the second part?
Second,
Is version A more understandable than version Zero?
Thanks! ^_^
First,
Are the pitch scoops on "heart" too much? Should I save it for the second part?
Second,
Is version A more understandable than version Zero?
Thanks! ^_^