I finally got the nerve to revisit this project so I could ask for help! I think it starts out fine, but it gets kinda sluggish as it goes, especially the last two choruses (and ESPECIALLY the final chorus). It's not a tempo issue, it's on-beat, it just sounds... off. Can anyone throw in their two cents? I've been agonizing over this for months.
(It needs a lot of polishing regarding tuning and dynamics, but I currently only have use of my non-dominant hand, so I'll have to wait until the pain from surgery wears off and I can use both hands freely before I can really fix it up. My apologies.)