Rin and Len- Weekender Girl English Cover

[vocaloidcreatornoob]

this is my first cover so be nice and tell me what you think

 

[cafenurse]

Congrats on finishing your first cover! I like the lyrics you came up with for this.
The first thing I notice is the instrumental is a lot quieter than the vocals, which is especially noticeable in the chorus when they're singing together.
There are also some parts where Rin sound choppy (noticeably the first two lines).
But great job on your first ever cover! I hope to see you post more in the future.

 

[vocaloidcreatornoob]

Congrats on finishing your first cover! I like the lyrics you came up with for this.
The first thing I notice is the instrumental is a lot quieter than the vocals, which is especially noticeable in the chorus when they're singing together.
There are also some parts where Rin sound choppy (noticeably the first two lines).
But great job on your first ever cover! I hope to see you post more in the future.

Thanks. Can you give me other examples where it sounds choppy? And thanks :) I worked hard :)

 

[cafenurse]

I think she also sounds choppy around 0:48.
Do you have any plans for your next cover?

 

[vocaloidcreatornoob]

I think she also sounds choppy around 0:48.
Do you have any plans for your next cover?

Yeah. Trick and Treat with Fukase and Miku in English. I enjoyed writing my own lyrics. It was so much fun.

 

[cafenurse]

excited to hear it!

 

[vocaloidcreatornoob]

excited to hear it!

I've just started working on it