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(Vocaloid/UTAU fanfic) More Than What She Seems

Scarlet Illusion

Scarlet Illusion

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Hi! I just wanted to share a fanfic I've been working on. It's mainly about Sukone Tei, but the Cryptonloids and the other Vipperloids play various roles as well. It has ~3 chapters that I've uploaded so far (I've written more, but I'm only updating weekly) and I'm quite proud of it. There's more info in the summary! ^^
Hope you all enjoy it, and if you do, feel free to share it! :miku_rylitah:

 
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Would you possibly consider posting to Ao3 as well? I don't have a FF account anymore, but I'd love to follow you! If not, that's alright; I can just bookmark it or something.
 
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I finally got caught up! I really like it so far. It's very easy to read, which helps its setting and characters shine through. I especially love Tei and Teto's relationship. It's really sweet! :lapis_ani_lili: I also love how Len's a total dork. Dorky Len is Best Len.

(By the way, is Len's girlfriend Kizuna Akari, or just a random girl who happens to be named Akari? Either way, I cracked up at Tei confronting her, and I'm normally not a fan of yandere situations! :LOL:)
 
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Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback! :D

Tei and Teto's relationship was fun to explore, and I always saw them as super close friends that are kind of like sisters, so I tried to reflect that in my writings! I'm glad you think it's sweet, because that was my goal!

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Dorky Len is Best Len.
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^I second this notion! XD

Also, Len's girlfriend isn't Kizuna Akari. It totally slipped my mind that there was already a Vocaloid with a similar name! So Akari's some random girl. XD
I'm glad you thought Tei's confrontation with Akari was funny, because I wanted to make it comical so I could have Yandere elements without having to write anything horror-ish.
 
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Hey, what do you have against birthday cake ice cream? What has it ever done to you? :LOL:

I liked seeing Tei's softer, more on-her-toes side! It was a very simple and sweet chapter.
 
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